Todd Anderson (
mumbled_truth) wrote2009-07-06 09:45 pm
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║ ninth stanza ║ voice
[hand-written / off network; this poem has been deemed a failure, crumpled up and thrown in the garbage]
Clawing at our cages cage?
We rattle the locks
We claw at the cage
Rattling our locks
We claw at the cage
Railing against control
Lashing out We cry out in rage
That which The City
Rattling our locks
As we claw at the cage
We rail and we cry
All the while on stage
Eyes yet unknown witness
Our lives in this place
Beyond the Deities
Do they Here and gone without trace
I can't work with rhymes at all
[After the comment, there is a small, angry dash of ink on the paper, a mark made in a moment of frustration. After this, there is no more written on the abused and rejected paper.]
[Voice Post]
It was a little odd having people know so much about me, but... that wasn't such a bad curse. Aside from how crowded it was, of course.
And... I hope some of you got a chance to see people you wanted to, even if it was just a day.
[Filtered to Deities / Unhackable]
Excuse me? I'm... I'm sorry to bother you again, I just... I've been thinking about the deal, for Neil's life? I think... I might want to do it.
Rattling our locks
We claw at the cage
Rattling our locks
As we claw at the cage
We rail and we cry
All the while on stage
Eyes yet unknown witness
Our lives in this place
Beyond the Deities
I can't work with rhymes at all
[After the comment, there is a small, angry dash of ink on the paper, a mark made in a moment of frustration. After this, there is no more written on the abused and rejected paper.]
[Voice Post]
It was a little odd having people know so much about me, but... that wasn't such a bad curse. Aside from how crowded it was, of course.
And... I hope some of you got a chance to see people you wanted to, even if it was just a day.
[Filtered to Deities / Unhackable]
Excuse me? I'm... I'm sorry to bother you again, I just... I've been thinking about the deal, for Neil's life? I think... I might want to do it.
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asgdsagsd todd's all like, "oh no, she does like me, doesn't she?"
Besides, the more I argue about this, the more people seem to compliment me. You're all going to give me a huge ego if I'm not careful.
lol Todd you're the attractive, tortured older poet
bonus! he's about the attractive, *self-sacrificing* tortured older poet XD
SWOON! (though, I must confess, I...don't actually find him attractive >.>);;
I just find Todd adorable. Ethan Hawke, otherwise, is okay... but not my favoritest.
Todd is adorable